May 11th, 2010
One of the most difficult aspects of writing is coming up with a thesis sentence. This sentence clearly and concisely explains the main argument of your paper. While a topic sentence comes at the beginning and explains what the paper is about, the thesis goes further and gives a rational argument about your topic.
Generally a thesis sentence should come at the end of an essay’s introduction. Many teachers and professors prefer that the sentence come as the last sentence of the first paragraph of the essay, but this can vary. Some do not mind two sentences, and some require only that the sentence is clear.
To create a thesis, you could either write the essay first and make a thesis around the paper, or have a thesis in mind while writing the paper. Either is fine, though for beginners it may be best to come up with a thesis first. Brainstorm arguments about the topic and come up with one argument that is basically an umbrella argument for other, more minor arguments. For example, a writer might use the thesis ‘painting relives stress’, and then go on to make arguments about why painting relieves stress.
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May 11th, 2010
A passive construction occurs when the performer of an action is not the grammatical subject of the sentence. The use of passive voice is not a grammatical error; the choice between active and passive voice is a stylistic one. However, a problem does arise when you write passively not by choice.
We write to inform and influence. When our voice wavers or is unclear, it diminishes the effect our words have on the reader. Consider this sentence: Japanese cars are manufactured with better fuel performance than American cars. That sentence is both passive and effective. While it does not identify the performer explicitly, it is obvious within the context of the statement
Next, consider this sentence: Japanese cars were determined to provide better fuel performance than American cars. This is a poorly structured sentence because it is unclear who made the determination. The determination holds a great deal more importance to the reader if a respected authority made it.
The following sentence will force readers to take notice: The US EPA determined that Japanese cars provide better fuel performance than American cars.
The next time you write, choose between active and passive voice. Do not allow the voice to choose you and thus weaken your argument.
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September 1st, 2009
Do you want to communicate on the web? Do you want to get your great idea across to as many listeners as possible, or do you want to sell your product to your key customers? If you do, then you have to start thinking seriously about how you communicate on the web. Everyone knows that the web is full of products and ideas, so you have to work at it if you want to stand out. But the good news is that with a little thought and preparation, you can make a real impact. The key is to think about both your audience and what you want to communicate - and then build an easy to read bridge that will connect the two.
Audience: So you have an audience - but what are they like as people? What are they like as readers? Are they intelligent and discerning? Do they have a lot of time on their hands, or are they busy? Do they have a sense of humour, or would they prefer clinical, no-nonsense writing? Getting a clear picture of your audience - and how they read - will provide you with great start. Once you have a clear idea of your audience, you can start to plan how you want to write for them.
You: With your audience in mind, you can then think about your writing. It’s no use chasing your audience to the point that your voice - your personality is erased. So plan what you are going to say, and then say it with confidence and clarity. Make sure that you are the answer to their problems. But whatever you do, make sure that you are clear, accurate and honest. It’s only then that you’ll really be able to communicate with your target audience.
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August 24th, 2009
If you want to sell your business idea to a potential investor (particularly in this age of over-the-internet angel investment), then you need to put a lot of time and energy into your business proposal. After all, if you’re asking someone else to put money up to support you and your ideas, you need to make absolutely certain that both your ideas and your proposal are 100% up to scratch.
When it comes down to it, the key to writing a good business proposal - like the key to all writing - is to consider your audience. So - what is the salient point about the audience for your business proposal? What you need to remember is that the bank manager or potential investor reading your report needs to know, within a few seconds (or minutes at most) whether or not you and your idea are credible. At heart, they won’t be assessing your idea - they can’t possibly have the same level of knowledge about the idea or the market as you - so they’ll instead be trying to work out as quickly as possible whether or not you know what you are talking about, and are good for your word.
This means that your business proposal - your representation of your business idea to a potential investor in written form - must be a scrupulously honest document, something that demonstrates in its integrity, clarity and precision that you know what you are talking about and are not concealing anything from them. If you want to convince people, there is nothing more important than honesty.
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August 11th, 2009
The Gunning fog index is a useful way of evaluating the complexity of any passage of writing. Using a fairly simple formula (looking at sentence and word length), there are a number of tools available that use this index to give you a rough approximation of how many years of education it would take to understand your writing.
A simple passage might be clear to someone with 5 years of education; a complex passage might be clear only to someone with 20 years of education - that’s 8 years after high school!
Don’t worry too much about the exact number, but do try to keep your writing at a level appropriate for your audience. Too complex, and no one will understand.
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August 6th, 2009
First sentences are fundamental. There’s simply no two ways about it - if you want to communicate, you have to start by getting your reader on side with your very first words. Successful journeys begin, as they say, with successful first steps. But saying this, we all know that first sentences are hard - maybe the hardest sentences you’ll write. We’ve all agonised over them, trying to condense complex arguments into one quick introduction, or to cunningly win the reader’s attention with a witty opening.
So - how do you write an excellent opening sentence? There is no gospel to this, but here are two tricks that can really help.
The first thing you can try is to consider the opening sentences of your favourite novels, books or essays. Consider, for example, the first sentence of Crime and Punishment: “On an exceptionally hot evening early in July a young man came out of the garret in which he lodged in S. Place and walked slowy, as though in hesitation, towards K. bridge.”; the opening sentence of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice: “It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife.”; or the beginning of the first Harry Potter: “Mr. and Mrs. Dursley, of number four, Privet Drive, were proud to say they were perfectly normal, thank you very much.” These - or your own favourites - might give you hints that can inspire your own writing.
The other thing you can do is a little more direct: just say what you want to say in the simplest, clearest language that comes to hand. No one will ever fault you for simply stating “This essay argues…”, “I am writing to apply for the position of…” or, perhaps, “First sentences are fundamental”.
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August 3rd, 2009
It has been said that the letter is a dying form of communication, a concept replaced in our hearts and minds by e-mails, phone calls, text messages and a variety of other modern communication methods. That may be the case in general, but it is still true that for some purposes - such as lodging a formal application or a complaint - the letter remains the most direct, acceptable and useful form of communication. Indeed, there remain cases in which the letter remains the only acceptable form of communication.
With that said, it is worth thinking a bit about what makes up a good letter. The key to this is claritiy of purpose. That is, if you want to write an effective letter - whether a cover letter for a job application, a formal complaint to a company or a correspondence to your local congressman or congresswoman - you need to hold a steely focus on the job at hand. You should begin the letter simply and directly by stating exactly what it is you are writing about. By all means elaborate about this in the following few paragraphs, but get rid of anything not crucial to the purpose of the letter. Extra sentences will (at best) merely waste your readers time, or (at worst) actively confuse your message.
At heart, the thing to remember is that only clear, accurate communication is listened to - and that, of course, is the goal of any letter writing.
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July 31st, 2009
A great title is crucial to successful writing - you’ll never get anywhere if you don’t announce yourself! After all, what is the very first thing that you read when you pick up a new book, paper or magazine article?
As important as titles are, writing one is never as easy as it seems. To come up with a good title, you need to consider two things: the needs and curiosity of your audience.
Firstly, titles obviously vary enormously depending on what your audience needs. If you are writing a novel, then something short and catchy is required - yet if you are writing a scientific research paper, then a highly descriptive passage is more appropriate. This consideration isn’t too complicated - simply think about your audience and look at the other literature they are reading. Following the standard forms of title in the genre will make your work a lot easier.
The second part is a fair bit more tricky. Regardless of the context, you need your title to pique the curiosity of your reader. The word ‘need’ can’t be stressed enough - if you settle on a bad title, then your putative reader will stop reading before they’ve even started. So how do you do this? There is no golden rule - just make it bold and inviting. Suggest to your reader that following on from your title is a story or article that will teach them things they never knew.
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July 30th, 2009
A great title is crucial to successful writing - you’ll never get anywhere if you don’t announce yourself! After all, what is the very first thing that you read when you pick up a new book, paper or magazine article?
As important as titles are, writing one is never as easy as it seems. To come up with a good title, you need to consider two things: the needs and curiosity of your audience.
Firstly, titles obviously vary enormously depending on what your audience needs. If you are writing a novel, then something short and catchy is required - yet if you are writing a scientific research paper, then a highly descriptive passage is more appropriate. This consideration isn’t too complicated - simply think about your audience and look at the other literature they are reading. Following the standard forms of title in the genre will make your work a lot easier.
The second part is a fair bit more tricky. Regardless of the context, you need your title to pique the curiosity of your reader. The word ‘need’ can’t be stressed enough - if you settle on a bad title, then your putative reader will stop reading before they’ve even started. So how do you do this? There is no golden rule - just make it bold and inviting. Suggest to your reader that following on from your title is a story or article that will teach them things they never knew.
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July 28th, 2009
The spell check features of modern day word processors are really quite useful tools. We should all make sure we run a spell check on a document before sending it off.
But they’re never perfect. Automated spell checking often falls down at proper nouns (names) and complicated or technical terms. One way you can get a little more certainty is to employ the spell checking ability of Google.
Just input any words you (or your word processor) aren’t sure about into Google’s search engine, and if it asks ‘Did you mean…?’ you might want to think about changing your spelling.
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